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Favorite place

• comfortable
• nice
• relax
• good smell
• exciting
• beautiful view
• clothes
• magazines
• TV
• green
• fashionable
• shop
• cute goods
  

My school life

My school life is good!! Because I have good friends of same class. Our class is very hard in secound grade but I have friends. We encourage each other. And, I belong to club that is ESS. We often go many place. It is very fun!! ESS is a club of english but we don't often study English in a club. Only twice in a year, recitation contest take place. In last year, I won a first prize in freshman's recitation contest.
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