Portfolio for writingIII

Student ID: 08147

Portfolio for Writing III, Section 1A OR 1C

[Please delete the unsuitable class section and "OR" (above), along with this line of remarks.]

(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

(See: Note 2, below.)

1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below.)

Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).

1.1. Showcase	Short titles with links to blog posts	Dates yyyy.mm.dd	¶	W	C	L	P	M
1-01a (2009.04.08)	Essay 1-01a: Dear host family	2009.04.09	0	260	5	0	0	0
1-01b (2009.04.20)	Essay1-01b:Dear host family	2009.04.20	4	257	0	0	0	0
(1-01c)
1-02a (2009.06.01)	Essay 1-02 a:University Life	2009.05.29	5	303	5	0	0	0
1-02b (2009.07.06)	Essay 1-02b:University Life	2009.07.06	5	301	0	0	0	0
(1-02c)
1-03a (2009.06.29)	Essay 1-03a: Lilo&Stitch	2009.06.29	6	409	0	0	1	0
1-03b (2009.07.13)	Essay 1-03b: Lilo&Stitch	2009.07.13	6	409	0	0	0	0
Totals	---	---

Key:

¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• I think that dear host family essay is the best because I wrote many things about me. For example, my family, my hobbies, and so on.

2.0. Comments

Showcase	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*	Dear Host family	2009.04.15	15	I asked her about her favorite music.
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*	University Life	2009.06.03	29	She asked me about my future dream.
2.4. Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.

• ...Comments are right side of my blog.

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

• I must make more comments on my friend's blog

• I must suggest on friend's blog

3.0. Book Reviews

3.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates: yyyy.mm.dd	Words	Comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	2007.05.16	39	1
BR 1-01	Happy Birthday, Thomas	2009.04.22	103	0
BR 1-02	Beef Stew	2009.05.07	108	0
BR 1-03	The Fox and the Stork	2009.06.08	152	0
BR 1-04	Arthur's Reading Race	2009.06.09	110	0
BR 1-05	The Runway Pancake	2009.06.21	136	0
BR 1-06	How Elephants lost wings	2009.06.23	108	0
BR 1-07	The sun and the wind	2009.06.23	110	0
BR 1-08	Clever rabbit and the Lion	2009.06.23	119	1
BR 1-09	The Little Giraffe	2009.07.05	181	0
BR 1-10	The Enormous Turnip	2009.07.06	167	0
BR 1-11	The goose that laid the Golden Eggs	2009.07.06	197	0
BR 1-12	The musician of Bremen	2009.07.12	129	1
---	---	Totals:

Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).

3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• I think that BR 1-11 is the my best book review because this book was the best interesting book for me and I could write longest.

4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media

Showcase	Yes	No
4.1. Does your blog display an archive?	✔
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?	✔
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?	✔
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?	✔
4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?	✔
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)	✔
"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")	✔
"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)	✔
"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)		✔
"movies" (plural) AND "websites" (plural)		✔
"brainstorms" (or "brainstorming"), "essay prep.," AND "free-writing" (or "free-writes")	✔
4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?	✔
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? ___ other labels attached to three or more posts	---	---
Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below Book (12) brainstorms (1) essays (6) free-writing (1) movies (2) portfolios (1) quickposts (1) reviews (2) revisions (3) Typing (14) university (1)	---	---
4.3. Links & media	---	---
4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics?	✔
Does your blog profile include a photo or graphic representation?		✔
How many of your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics? ___ posts including photos or other graphics	---	---
4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?	✔
How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links? ___ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)	---	---
4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?	✔
How many of your blog posts this semester include other media? ___ posts including other media	---	---
What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list the kinds here: ... ... ...	---	---
What media content that you originally produced, if any, do your blog posts for this semester contain? Please list and explain each item briefly, and add short links and dates (yyyy.mm.dd) for reference. ... (short link, date) ... (short link, date) ... (short link, date)	---	---

4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.

1. ...use the photos as many as I can

2. ...use the easy phrase

3. ...simple layout

5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing for it

Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).

• ...I became to be able to write essay with English before.

• ...I could know many things of blog. For example, how to paste picture and so on.

• ...It was difficult for me to continue blog.

6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors

• ...I must start blogging more early next semester's blog.

• ...I must make more comments on friend's blog.

• ...I must devise my blog's layout.

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Notes:

1. This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c and Writing IV: Portfolio, §§1a & 1c portfolios (2008-09).

2. Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 1st (spring) semester PPF first.

3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).

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License:

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