From today, we have test. This semester I have eleven test for two weeks. It will be hard week from today because I don't have recess of my part time job. So, I don't have a time to study enough. But, I'm looking forward to my summer vacation from August 1. So, I will do my best from today.
My first tast was biology. Yesterday, I studied it, so I could answer.
But, from tomorrow there are a lot of test, so I will have to study more hard.
After having test, I study in library with my friend....
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2009年7月16日木曜日
HANA★
I went to down town to eat lunch with my friends. We went to "Hana" . There is in showere street. And this restaurant is famous for cheap lunch and lunch box. It cost only 500 yen. It is one coin lunch. It is very good things for us.
We choiced hamburge lunch with pilaf. Then, cook maked pilaf for us in front of us with iron plate. It is like a full- dress restaurant, so we thought that it wasn't only 500 yen lunch!! We enjoyed not only eating lunch but also talking with cook. He said "Please come to here in dinner time. If you come, we will make price down." We promiced that we will come here again in dinner time.
Plese try to go there!!
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2009年7月12日日曜日
youme town★
Today, I went to "youme town" to buy a sofa and table and so on with my mother.
In the after noon, we went to there by a car. It takes about twenty minutes by a car. Recently, I didn't go there. First, we went to furniture shop (Nitori). There are many furniture. We were looking for a good sofa. We watched many sofa and choiced that one. The sofa was very nice!!
After that, we went to window shopping in there. Then, I found very cute sandal and my mother bought for me the sandal. I was very happy!! I will take this sandal every day.
Next, we went to "Mr. Max". In there, we went to UNIQLO. I found some good clothes and these were very cheap!! The pants was only 1,990 yen and the skirt was only 790 yen!! It was very happy price for us. My mother bought these clothes for me too.
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BR:1-12 The musician of Bremen
I read a book that is "The musician of Bremen".
Once upon a time, there was a donkey, dog, cat and rooster. Their master was very mean person, so they planed to escape from their house.
Then, in the dark forest, they found a house. In there there were some dishes but there were some gang of robbers. They had an idea that was suprised by burst. Then, the robber escaped.
After this, they could eat the dishes and took a rest. But, the robber came back there. So, they surprsed him again. Then, he escaped from there again. From then, the robbers never came back to there again.
After I read this book, I think it was good that they could escape from their master and the robbers.
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Once upon a time, there was a donkey, dog, cat and rooster. Their master was very mean person, so they planed to escape from their house.
Then, in the dark forest, they found a house. In there there were some dishes but there were some gang of robbers. They had an idea that was suprised by burst. Then, the robber escaped.
After this, they could eat the dishes and took a rest. But, the robber came back there. So, they surprsed him again. Then, he escaped from there again. From then, the robbers never came back to there again.
After I read this book, I think it was good that they could escape from their master and the robbers.
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2009年7月8日水曜日
Portfolio for writingIII
Student ID: 08147
Portfolio for Writing III, Section 1A OR 1C
[Please delete the unsuitable class section and "OR" (above), along with this line of remarks.]
(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. Overview
Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
(See: Note 2, below.)
1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below.)
Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).
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1.2. Best Essay
Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
I think that dear host family essay is the best because I wrote many things about me. For example, my family, my hobbies, and so on.
2.0. Comments
Showcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
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2.4. Most comments on: | Titles of posts with link | Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
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2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | --- | |
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** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.
...Comments are right side of my blog.
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
I must make more comments on my friend's blog
I must suggest on friend's blog
3.0. Book Reviews
3.1. Showcase | Short titles | Dates: yyyy.mm.dd | Words | Comments |
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Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).
3.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
I think that BR 1-11 is the my best book review because this book was the best interesting book for me and I could write longest.
4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media
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What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.
...use the photos as many as I can
...use the easy phrase
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5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing for it
Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).
...I became to be able to write essay with English before.
...I could know many things of blog. For example, how to paste picture and so on.
...It was difficult for me to continue blog.
6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors
...I must start blogging more early next semester's blog.
...I must make more comments on friend's blog.
...I must devise my blog's layout.
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Notes:
This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c and Writing IV: Portfolio, §§1a & 1c portfolios (2008-09).
Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 1st (spring) semester PPF first.
The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
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License:
This portfolio template is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License. Please attribute to "the Writing Studio Blog" (without quotation marks).
2009年7月6日月曜日
Essay 1-02b:University Life
There are many universities and faculties in Japan, so we can study what we want to know and interesting things. For example, it is foreign language, nursing, teaching, and so on.
I study English in Kumamoto Gakuen University, because I want to be a flight attendant in the future. The job of flight attendant needs English very much because they have to communicate with many country’s people. I thought that I will major in English in university. Now, there are many English classes in university. For example, it is reading, speaking, writing, listening, and so on. These four skills are very important for study English. In these, I am especially poor at listening and speaking skills, so I recently watch foreign movies and speak with overseas students in English as often as possible. Someday, I want to be able to communicate with many country’s people and realize my dream to become a flight attendant.
My friend studies nursing in university because she want to be a nurse and do a volunteer in foreign country in the future. She studies not only nursing but also biology, chemistry, mathematic and so on. She looks so hard very much because there are many things that they have to memorize.
Also, there are university students who study other things. For example, some people study economics. They study about finance and bookkeeping and do on. Most of these students aim to be a bank clerk and officer in the future. Other, some people study music. Most of these students aim to be a famous musician.
For this, they study music very hard in university every day.Like this, there are many faculties, so we can choose a faculty that we want to study and interesting thing. And we can aim to realize our dream, so we are lucky!!
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I study English in Kumamoto Gakuen University, because I want to be a flight attendant in the future. The job of flight attendant needs English very much because they have to communicate with many country’s people. I thought that I will major in English in university. Now, there are many English classes in university. For example, it is reading, speaking, writing, listening, and so on. These four skills are very important for study English. In these, I am especially poor at listening and speaking skills, so I recently watch foreign movies and speak with overseas students in English as often as possible. Someday, I want to be able to communicate with many country’s people and realize my dream to become a flight attendant.
My friend studies nursing in university because she want to be a nurse and do a volunteer in foreign country in the future. She studies not only nursing but also biology, chemistry, mathematic and so on. She looks so hard very much because there are many things that they have to memorize.
Also, there are university students who study other things. For example, some people study economics. They study about finance and bookkeeping and do on. Most of these students aim to be a bank clerk and officer in the future. Other, some people study music. Most of these students aim to be a famous musician.
For this, they study music very hard in university every day.Like this, there are many faculties, so we can choose a faculty that we want to study and interesting thing. And we can aim to realize our dream, so we are lucky!!
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BR:1-11 The goose that laid the Golden Eggs
I read a book that is "The goose that laid the Golden Eggs".
This story of one husband and wife. They were poor but they spend enough life. They had a goat for milk and hens, geese for eggs. Also, they had a yard for vegitables and fruit. Every morning, Tom go to village to sell the eggs. One morning, he found one strange egg. It was dark yellow and very heavy. At first, he thought it was a trick. But, his wife said "It isn't a trick. It's a golden eggs."
Then, he went to see Gold smith. He amazed very much and he said that " I want to buy this egg". He paid to Tom. It was a lot of money. From then, he found golden eggs every day and sell it. So, they became rich.
One day, they had a idea that is kill the goose. Because they thought that there were many golden eggs inside of goose's body. But, there weren't. From then they couldn't find golden eggs. So, they became poor again.
After reading the book, I thought that it is bad things to push our luck!!
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This story of one husband and wife. They were poor but they spend enough life. They had a goat for milk and hens, geese for eggs. Also, they had a yard for vegitables and fruit. Every morning, Tom go to village to sell the eggs. One morning, he found one strange egg. It was dark yellow and very heavy. At first, he thought it was a trick. But, his wife said "It isn't a trick. It's a golden eggs."
Then, he went to see Gold smith. He amazed very much and he said that " I want to buy this egg". He paid to Tom. It was a lot of money. From then, he found golden eggs every day and sell it. So, they became rich.
One day, they had a idea that is kill the goose. Because they thought that there were many golden eggs inside of goose's body. But, there weren't. From then they couldn't find golden eggs. So, they became poor again.
After reading the book, I thought that it is bad things to push our luck!!
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BR:1-10 The Enormous Turnip
I read a book that is "The Enormous Turnip".
This story is about one family.
One day, the farmer went to his field to gather turnip. Then, he found one turnip. This had very big leaves. He thought that "I'll gather that". But, he couldn't gather it. Because the turnip too big to move. His wife saw this scene, so she said that "I'll help". She hugged the farmer. But they couldn't gather it. Next, their son came. He said that "I'll help" too. But they couldn't gather it. And one after another came here. The dog, cat, bird..... But they couldn't gather it easily.
At last, the turnip popped out of the ground.
Next morning, they ate the turnip for lunch, dinner. But, they couldn't finish to eat, so they ate it every day. The farmer said "Next year, I'll grow carrots".
After I read this story, I thought that I know this story. But, I didn't know last scene. So, I thought it was fun!!
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This story is about one family.
One day, the farmer went to his field to gather turnip. Then, he found one turnip. This had very big leaves. He thought that "I'll gather that". But, he couldn't gather it. Because the turnip too big to move. His wife saw this scene, so she said that "I'll help". She hugged the farmer. But they couldn't gather it. Next, their son came. He said that "I'll help" too. But they couldn't gather it. And one after another came here. The dog, cat, bird..... But they couldn't gather it easily.
At last, the turnip popped out of the ground.
Next morning, they ate the turnip for lunch, dinner. But, they couldn't finish to eat, so they ate it every day. The farmer said "Next year, I'll grow carrots".
After I read this story, I thought that I know this story. But, I didn't know last scene. So, I thought it was fun!!
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2009年7月5日日曜日
BR:1-09 The Little Giraffe
I read a book that is "The Little Giraffe".
One day, there was one little giraffe. This giraffe was first giraffe in the world. He lived with best friend of rhino. They looked for food every day, but they couldn't find them. So, they tried to see one wise man. The wise man said them to come here tomorrow. Next day, only the giraffe went to there. In there, the wise man gave a drink of magic for the giraffe. Soon, the giraffe became big giraffe. After this, the giraffe went to out side. In there, there was the rhno. The giraffe asked him "Why didn't you come wise man's house?". He answered "Oh, I forgot!!". The rhino didn't remenber to go to wise man's house. He said " I want to get the drink too." But, there weren't the drink. Then, the rhino was very angry. So, rhino are angry now.
After I read this book, I couldn't understand last scene. But, I thought that rhino's image. So, I couold understand this means.
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One day, there was one little giraffe. This giraffe was first giraffe in the world. He lived with best friend of rhino. They looked for food every day, but they couldn't find them. So, they tried to see one wise man. The wise man said them to come here tomorrow. Next day, only the giraffe went to there. In there, the wise man gave a drink of magic for the giraffe. Soon, the giraffe became big giraffe. After this, the giraffe went to out side. In there, there was the rhno. The giraffe asked him "Why didn't you come wise man's house?". He answered "Oh, I forgot!!". The rhino didn't remenber to go to wise man's house. He said " I want to get the drink too." But, there weren't the drink. Then, the rhino was very angry. So, rhino are angry now.
After I read this book, I couldn't understand last scene. But, I thought that rhino's image. So, I couold understand this means.
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2009年7月1日水曜日
Vacation plans
In this Summer vacation, I will travel to two places. First, I will go to Hukuoka with my friend in August 17. In there, we will meet high school's friends who live in Hukuoka. I'm really looking forward to see them. Second is Kannsai. I will go to Osaka, Kobe and Kyoto with my friend by train. In last spring vacation, we went to Shimane by train, so next we want to go more far place. So, we decided to go to Knnsai. I think that it will be tired but I'm looking forward to this too.
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About blogging
I have to write blog from became second grade. It is very hard for me to continue to write blog. But, we have to do it. So, I write blog. First, I didn't know what I should write about. From then, I looked for blog's story of my life. I decided to write about my favorite lunch places and occurrences of a day and so on. And I tried to paste my photo to my blog. From then, I felt that it is little fun to write blog. From now on, I will continue to write blog.
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"Kurea"
Today, it was heavy rain day. I don't like rainy days.
After school, I and my friend, Arisa went to "Kurea". First we ate dinner in there because we were very hungry. I choosed "Takoyaki" and Arisa choosed "Yakisoba". It was very delicious!!
After eat dinner, we did window shopping. We went to many shop in there. But, we didn't find nice one. Finally, we went to supermarcket to buy a juice in "Kurea".
We had a good time in there!!(83words)
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